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Sentinel's Vigil ConclusionIX Bringing her up to speed, easy enough. It was the rest that didn’t go over so well. As, for example, the plan to endow ultimate power upon us at the cost of all other Protectors. “Who will defend their worlds? How can the Nexus condemn them so readily to save its own hide?” “Be reasonable,” I pleaded. “Once the Rifters learn the location of the Gateway, we just have to decimate their forces and purge them from any other world they occupy. They won’t have any reason to attack other worlds, Jesse, if they see their goSentinel's Vigil Conclusion
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Sentinel's Vigil Part 3VI My fellow Protectors had voiced objections to our appeasement style of diplomacy. The Xi Sai Protector in particular believed that reason could still prevail over the Chamber’s selfish nature. Jesse outright refused to participate in the fulfillment of any Chamber requests. The other two, one a Lazaleli, a winged hominid with distinctly ape-ish characteristics in the face, and a Chismos male of stocky build, believed, like me, that the best course of action would be to silence any complaints the Chamber may have had, thus eliminating any excuses. “For only when they have noSentinel's Vigil Part 3
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Sentinel's Vigil, Part 2III Egos bristled, chafing against one another in the cramped confines of the Chamber. Ever since we returned to session, with the Tibran Emperor in tow, our efforts had been focused on convincing him to commit his fleets to the defense of the universe. “Why should I sentence my flocks to die, without valor or honor, in the deepest reaches of space against an endless foe?” Incredibly cooperative, that one. “We,” I declared, seeing the central projection melt to my image, “can only do so much, and less now, as only eleven remain. Perhaps we could steSentinel's Vigil, Part 2
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Sentinel's Vigil Part 1Sentinel’s VigilSentinel's Vigil Part 1
David Jacobs
Begun November 17th, 2008 Ended January 3rd, 2009
For my parents, of course Support always helps, and love is invaluable For my editor, Michael You’ve earned your spot in this dedication And for the rest of the world Enjoy
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I know it is long, but I REALLY need feedback! Even if you just read half of it to give me an idea on how it's going?? It's totally cool if you can't or don't want too, just thought I'd ask cause I need help and you read chapter 1, so you might even like it!! Hope that's ok!!
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